History tells that people have often thought about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen. What is your opinion about an ideal society? How can we create an ideal society?
It is no doubt true that people, nowadays, have thought about how to create an ideal society. However, unfortunately, most of the times which people try to make fail. For my perspective, I personally believe that there are numerous factors to create an ideal world which people only need to improve to leverage the society.
An ideal society, in my opinion, is made by a plethora of factors which should be taken into consideration. An ideal society should be created by the freedom of productive citizens, especially young individuals. This means that citizens can be free to pursue their dream or give their own choices. In fact, parents always interfere with their children’s opinions, which children want to decide by themselves. Besides that, some children who are living a sedentary life want to be an intern or earn money by their hands but their parents find any solutions to tackle that. In that case, parents can halt their offspring’s dreams and careers when they do not enable children to pursue dreams.
On the other hand, there are a variety of ways which people need to do to enhance the current society. Firstly, the most apparent clarification is that every individual should improve the quality of the environment and the air. The living environment and the air contribute immensely to an ideal atmosphere. The society which seems to be ideal not only has the clean environment and high quality of the air but also updates various advances day by day. This means that individuals should be helped by technological advances to improve the quality of life. For example, the establishment of technological international chains such as Apple, Samsung have boosted the convenience in the humans’ life.
In conclusion, the freedom of citizens in the world is the most prominent factor to make the world as people’s thoughts. In my opinion, there are numerous ways to make their own ideal world, especially improving the quality environment and the air parallels with updating technological advances.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09939759036 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86814529607 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509036144578 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.815725234 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.5882352941 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5294117647 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29411764706 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296216613424 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100511140017 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.096852824561 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186921648536 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101083656638 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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