People remember special gifts or presents that they have received. Why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
One thing that people recall the most has to be receiving gifts and presents, in particular, special ones and this essay will explain why. In a number of occasions, it is socially acceptable and almost required to buy and give presents, and while this may turn into an obligation, sometimes those gifts represent something special.
What lays behind the choice of a particular object or piece of clothing etc. varies from person to person and occasion to occasion, but when we choose something out of love and with having that particular friend/lover/relative in mind, the thoughtfulness of the present is what is remembered most. Among all the gifts that one person may receive during his or her life, those which have a special meaning will be remembered because they will always be associated with whoever gifted them. For example, a medicine student who is gifted his/her first stethoscope will probably remember forever who bought such a meaningful present for them.
Similarly, the importance and uniqueness of the gift are other points that make it easy to be remembered: today, newlywed couples organize their honeymoons in exotic places of distant countries, and sometimes this turns out to be expensive. For this reason, the husband and wife create a fund where guests and relatives can collect money in order to gift the couple the vacation of their dreams: this often turns out to be the most appreciated and recalled wedding present among all.
In conclusion, a number of factors make a gift so special that it will be remembered, but it is not just the amount of money spent that will make it remarkable: a great present is unique, thoughtful and made out of love.
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...nique, thoughtful and made out of love.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, similarly, so, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95053003534 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79720314166 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572438162544 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.8368761443 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.666666667 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4444444444 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1111111111 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169242397377 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706682036005 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397186344412 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986591680153 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362353570856 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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