The graph below shows average yearly rainfall in Moscow and Sanfrancisco, measured in millimeters
The bar chart below summarizes the information about the average amount of rain that falls in Moscow and in San Francisco per year, measured in millimeters. Overall, it can be seen that in San Francisco it rains more than in Moscow year-round, but especially during the winter months. Moscow, on the other hand, sees a higher amount of rain during the summertime, when it nearly never rains in San Francisco.
During January, February, and December the American city sees an average of slightly less than 120mm of rain, with the volume reaching 80mm in November and March, almost 1/4 less than in the winter. Furthermore, April's average drops to 40mm, almost the same as Moscow's range, and half of how much it rains in the Russian city in the summer.
June, July, and August see an average of 80 to 90mm of rainfall per month, almost 8 times San Francisco's share.
To sum up, it can be said that San Francisco is more rainy year-round, but summers in Moscow are definitely more wet than those in America.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 353, Rule ID: SUMMER_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...sees a higher amount of rain during the summertime, when it nearly never rains in San Fran...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69491525424 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47434408012 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587570621469 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.427413102 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.714285714 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177240713444 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092886604335 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645614368535 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100871893804 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398297781114 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.