Some people believe that we have too many choices these days. To what extent to you agree or disagree?
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It argued by some that, today, us living in first world countries have too many choices and opportunities in life. I find myself completely agreeing with this statement, and this essay will discuss the reasons behind my opinion.
In the first place, what should raise awareness is the large number of food choices that we have: in cities' neighborhoods supermarkets appear apparently out of nowhere, and sometimes two or three grocery stores selling the same products end up being close to each other. The same happens for restaurants: even though having a big number of locations to have dinner might sound great, most of the time people find difficulties in selecting a place because there are too many from which to choose. For example, the growing quantity of different restaurants serving different cuisines from all over the world: Chinese, Japanese, Thai, Korean, etc. one person arrives to spend up to one hour deciding what to eat! In my opinion, this phenomenon is not ideal for anybody, neither restaurant owners nor consumers.
Similarly, transportation methods are growing at a high rate, and this can be seen both in large and small growing cities. Nowadays, people can choose between public transport facilities, taxis, private vehicles, Uber, car sharing, bike sharing, etc. From my perspective, having a bigger number of options on transports' methods can ease the life of many people. For example, those who cannot drive, ride a bicycle or walk long distances, can rely on other ways to get across town without difficulties.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that we do have too many choices in too many aspects of your everyday life, but this is not necessarily a negative thing: although it complicates our life, at the same time having options can simplify it.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, if, similarly, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06802721088 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70256449975 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663265306122 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.1232141881 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.454545455 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7272727273 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1711707019 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583798762112 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546754523008 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109452897703 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518474429408 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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