These days, various types of advertisements encircling public in numerous ways. It is considered by some people that it has potential negative impact on people's life. In my opinion, I completely agree with the statement and think that advertisements have significant adverse effects on living standard.
To commence with, the most dangerous affect is that, some commercials related to food and drinks could adversely affect public health. For example, persuasive alcohol and fast food advertisements attract huge crowd and public tempt to buy these products that ultimately could result in severe health issues namely, diabetes, obesity, heart problems, liver issues etc.
Another point to consider is that, people get fascinated by different commercials and buy most expensive products of low quality. For example, companies target wide range of consumers, to promote their products on tremendous cost by attractive promotions on various media services such as, television ads, newspapers ads, magazines ads, radio ads, billboards and lots other. Although, sometimes products are of poor quality, these marketing strategies lure public to buy these products even on high price and excellent quality products ignored by people due to lack of effective marketing.
Next obvious effect is that sometimes it is extremely arduous for parents to discourage their children to purchase things after getting influenced by commercial on kid's programme. For instance, promotional advertisements related to toys, video games etc generally comes amid children programmes on kid's channel that specifically yearn young ones to insist their parents to buy those products for them.
Finally, people buy the things unnecessarily, that could affect their monthly budget. To illustrate, various celebrity endorsements influenced youngsters to acquire the products irrespective of their requirements such as, expensive dresses, jewelleries, watches, perfume etc., that eventually drastically affect their savings and could surge their debt as well.
In conclusion, products commercials have serious drawbacks and negatively affect people's life in various ways. Government should enforce strict law and legislations for these marketing commercials especially, related to public health concern and companies should have tight regulations to reveal the content and quality of their products.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t food advertisements attract huge crowd and public tempt to buy these products t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2039.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.91014492754 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9229034947 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588405797101 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7196859935 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.642857143 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6428571429 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149064605677 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738708892802 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929166008126 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906116210925 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088393151313 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.29 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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