Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination,while other think that tere are more important factors such as money and appearance.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A minority of indivuals in contemporary society belive that success in life comes from effort and determination, whereas others argue that severals factors, namely money and appearance are equaly important. From my perspective, I strongly agree with the statements above and the following essay will support my point.
On the one hand, people in the 4.0 diustrial era tend to care more about the outside appearance rather than the inner spirit. For instance, a famous Vietnamese singer name Duc Phuc have had a plastic sugery in oder to gain a large amount of fans. Although, having a huge range of talent but a majority of audiences have a positive view at him due to his appearance. Thus, it is hard for any indisuals to archieve success without pay attention other factors.
On the other hand, having a good working personality help every person gain lots of knowledge and experiences. Neverthenless, owning a large amouunt of valueble things still bring a lot of benefits. In paritcularly, teenagers who born into affluent families have more conditions and facilities than underprivileged ones. As a result, finace also a momentous factor that effect the success of any indivisual in the current society.
In conclusion, good looking appearance, satble condition still need to be sccompanied by determiation and hard working to make various achievements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, still, then, thus, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21917808219 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03250669062 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.703196347032 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7544258724 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.909090909 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166121842787 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527584039179 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468372588061 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0874661701514 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334206711785 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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