People think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems. Give your opinion.
My work
It is widely believed that one solution to environmental and traffic issues would be for the national authorities to raise the price of petrol. While numerous individuals consider that this might be an effective measure, I would agree that other remedies might have a greater impact.
On the one hand, it is clear that the price of fuel plays a little role in pressing problems of traffic and pollution. The demand for time-saving and safe traveling in the modern world is more and more increasing which makes the change in the price of gas become rather meaningless. In other words, fuel has become fundamental energy for everyone, so even if the price were increased, the gas would still be purchased and used and the problems would stay unsolved. In addition to that, this problem could easily disturb and annoy civilians. This, coupled with the reluctance of using expensive fuel to travel every day, could be a countereffect and become irrelevant.
Contrary to the solution to fuel prices, alternatives to the increased price of petrol show greater effectiveness. First, the government could implement some regulations restricting the use of private vehicles such as cars and encourage people to use public transportation. This would relieve many roads from heavy traffic by reducing the number of vehicles, alleviate the damage to the transport infrastructure and directly ease the exhaust fume which cause environmental pollution. Secondly, besides public transportation, the government can support more environmentally friendly transports like using bicycles. To cite an example, Amsterdam, the capital of the Netherlands is considered to be one of the most famous destinations for its cycling culture.
In conclusion, I believe that raising the price of fuel would be the worst remedy to this solution and other methods should be adopted instead. However, people inevitably must lend a helping hand to solve the problem together and for the benefit of our future generations as well as the well-being of the existing community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29538461538 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99244650657 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575384615385 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0299604643 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.928571429 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192588082545 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064331119788 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306408399391 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113976491002 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325233617387 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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