Some researchers claimed that Environment is facing to be more and more serious threats.This status-quo was originated by many factors, most of them was affected by the deadly hand of human-beings. It can't be ignored that Excessive cars and other vehicles have the contributors to the damage,so there is often debate that the government should go up remarkably the cost of fuel for ways of transportation to address environmental issues thoroughly. I approve with this notion and i would outline my reasons in this essay.
To begin with, There are several underlying reasons for dwellers to have a prejudice for increasing fuel-related means of transport. As far as we know, More and more renewable sources of energy tied to alternative substances such as wind, water, and electricity are actualizing the dream of green environment. For example, If having the greater demand for utilizing this sources of energy effectively, public transportation system would be less pressure and help vehicles circulate smoothly, similarity addressing the traffic congestion, which can be the main contributors to ascending exhaust fumes or air pollution.
Another reason is worth considersing that The enhancement of people's aware could be simulated into the increased cost of fuel or coal. They ought to comprehend a dilemma that Environment are endured by many serious problems both natural impact and human impact. The government impose more stringent regulations for citizens to limit the abuse of natural resources and use new personalized public transport instead, simultaneously, this also solve some diseases about respiratory and increase longevity.
In conclusion, I hold fast to the belief with those who think that The government should propose some solutions about increasing the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. This can not only solve the issues which life environment are incurring but also help it better more and more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39273927393 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0638618794 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600660066007 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.4150485785 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.545454545 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5454545455 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283115860121 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102352008111 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102336095633 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174938011707 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515011630401 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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