People think that the government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems. Give your opinion.
It is believed that the authorities should rise the price of fuel for automobiles and other transportations as a measure to tackle environmental issue. As far as i am concerned, I do not agree with the statement.
On the one hand, this action can be done due to some reasons. One of the main point is that it can help to limit the consumption of petrol, which takes a considerable role in the total emissions on the world. Since car is a common vehicle that people all around the world use daily, an infinite amount of fume will be exhausted from it, causing an air pollution and greenhouse problem. Therefore, by rising the fuel price, less people will use combustion engine and tend to buy a more environmental-friendly version such as electric transportations.
However, there are several reasons why i totally disagree with the idea. First of all, not all people can afford electric vehicle or even high-cost petrol, especially impoverished ones. In some developing countries, the most usual transport is motorbike, which is also an combustion engine and releases a significant amount of dirt and fume. Despite the drawback, many people use it because of its economical price. Another reasons to support my opinion is that the government can encourage civilians to follow the rule such as avoiding littering and saving energy as to protect the environment. If they disobey, the government can order them to pay a fine.
In conclusion, although it is widely thought that the cost of fuel should be increased in order to maintain the environment, I still disagree with this idea.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, still, therefore, as to, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94382022472 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07400526013 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606741573034 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2711330257 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.538461538 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229706210311 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065169060399 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065178556684 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13810499812 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027451626534 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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