PEOPLE THINK THAT SOCIAL NETWORKING SITES HAVE A HUGE NEGATIVE IMPACT ON BOTH
INDIVIDUALS AND SOCIETY. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?
Some people believe that the rate of social media usage is increasing nowadays, and that social platforms have a significant negative impact on individuals and communities. I agree with this opinion.
An increasing number of people, especially teenagers, are addicted to social media platforms like Facebook or Twitter. They spend most of their time scrolling through the internet, and this has a direct effect on their real-life relationships. Some young people feel isolated from their families because they prefer sharing their interests through forums or video games. According to an interview conducted by BBC, 20% of daily internet users find it difficult to integrate into society, and this figure is rising each year.
Moreover, social networking has a significant negative impact on the community. If people choose to spend their time on social media instead of dating and hanging out with their friends, they may become distant from one another, leading to a community devoid of emotion. Furthermore, many influencers are subjected to verbal abuse on the internet, not because of anything they have done wrong, but merely because of their appearance. This leads to a toxic community and may result in people from other countries having a negative view of them.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the use of social media has many negative effects on individuals and communities.
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- While people in developing countries are happier than in the past people in developed countries are less happy Why What can be learnt from this 67
- Some people argue job satisfaction is more important than job security Others believe a permanent job is more important Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2972972973 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7744530058 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585585585586 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5806462466 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.909090909 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191423514446 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868666351086 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858821937725 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145767332877 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857639276236 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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