PEOPLE SHOULD THINK THAT SOCIAL NETWORKING SITES HAVE A HUGE NEGATIVE IMPACT ON BOTH
INDIVIDUALS AND SOCIETY. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?
It is thought by some people that nowadays, the rate of people who use social media is
increasing. And social platforms have a massive disadvantage effect on personnel and the community. In
my view, I agree with this opinion.
Currently, more people especially teenagers addicted to social websites. They spend almost
their time surfing social platforms such as Facebook or Twitter and this direct effect on their real
relationships. Some young people feel isolated from their families because they were familiar with
sharing their interests online via forms or video games. For example, an interview of BBC showed that
20% of people who use the internet every day feel difficult to integrate into society and this figure is
rising year by year.
In addition, Social networking has a big negative impact on the community. If everyone chooses
to scrolling internet instead of dating and hanging out with their friends, people gradually become
distant from each other. And this society could become an emotionless community. Furthermore, a lot
of influencers were attacked with swear words on the internet while they do not do anything wrong or
just because of their appearance. It leads to a toxic community and international friends could have a
bad view of them.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the production of social media brings many bad effects on
individuals and communities.
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- Some people think children have the freedom to make mistakes while other people believe that adults should prevent children from making mistakes Discuss both sides and give your opinion 73
- Some people argue job satisfaction is more important than job security Others believe a permanent job is more important Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 78
- Companies use different ways to increase sales What different ways do companies use to increase sales What is the most effective 78
- In some countries more and more adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26548672566 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77196056416 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619469026549 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9203348695 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5384615385 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3846153846 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.38176352705 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19451413527 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733455945102 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535748491342 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0625411973942 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477636958891 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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