People thought that the human race is steadily improving in every area of life. ln, which areas do you think we have made important progress in nowadays? ln, which areas do you think we still need to make progress in?
Owing to the rapid development of human beings based on the aspects of life advanced, what we do not imagines that our life beyond their recognizable limited which has been existed hundred out of years. Thank outstanding of technology and science becoming an instrument which is adapted to all of the basic desires in humankind. Looking from an overall perspective, apart from taking pride in innovation, which needs to still upgrade in some areas in the day to come.
In the emerging of technology and transportation, it is irrefutable that these are becoming an essential instrumental more than ever had. Some evidence is given that the air industry is an aid to getting closer distances from the corners of the world. What it meant that is the passengers has been ensured safety and being on time planned, and more speedy, in which, rail and road transport still has achieved significantly. In addition, the Internet is spreading out to the public, with inline contacting with each other by calling and video throughout phone or telecommunication. In other words, the application of technology in mass production that is guaranteed people the whole things available.
On the other hand, it is not denied that the prominence of medicine in curing more patients and fight against diseases are worthy of respect. Indeed, during the Covid-19 has been occurred in nearly 2 years, from 2019 to 2021, scientists have been trying to seek the therapy in against infecting on the world, as Coronavirus variant multiply recently that are caused mortality rate considerable soared so that it put pressure on the health fields. Moreover, global warming is constantly which are threatened people lives, even alternative resources or green resources are steps towards avoiding the depleting resources or carbon emissions to people’s health.
In conclusion, the world is concealing secrets that humanity could not be explored, and yet it still has prompted people who are detecting and invention more technology. It is certainly believed that no matter what worldwide looked are, a future will prospect depending on human instinct.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: DONT_NEEDS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'imagine'?
Suggestion: imagine
...spects of life advanced, what we do not imagines that our life beyond their recognizable...
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Line 1, column 182, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...gnizable limited which has been existed hundred out of years. Thank outstanding of tech...
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Line 1, column 291, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...oming an instrument which is adapted to all of the basic desires in humankind. Looking fro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, still, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21637426901 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89951758333 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.939574367 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.230769231 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3076923077 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136582483872 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400764367663 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447430926383 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0784534195207 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642011155928 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.