People today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the causes and solutions?
many people say that they are not safe at home as well as they are out.Others think that home is the most safe place.In my opinion,there several reasons to not feel safe,such as, houses do not adequate safe cares and there are so many thefts.
Firstly,some people think houses are not so comfortable for living safer.By this I mean,government should take new kind of solutions to solve the problem.Forexample,they should work such kind of laws to improve safeness.However peple can take care themselves for living safer than authority do a things.
Everyday,there will be a lot of thefts in the world so that people may feel themselves safe neither at home and outside.it is said that government should improve policy for prevent thefts.Furthermore,media may warn people about thefts,and they are punished because of that.By the other hand people may not understand this situations and they do not take care of it.
In conclusion,there are lots of reasons to be selfless at hone or outside.there may be not adequate homes or policy may not work about it and it takes much time for changing our lifes.In my view,governments should do new solutions,such as,prevent thefts,build safer houses,warns people about that and they may coo-work with media to people living safer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, i mean, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12980769231 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.54860781415 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543269230769 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 20.2975951904 256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.9610814832 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 266.75 106.682146367 250% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.0 20.7667163134 250% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 33.75 7.06120827912 478% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264809798883 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182382482753 0.084324248473 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10037232691 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182382482753 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10037232691 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.7 13.0946893788 219% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 18.7 50.2224549098 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 11.3001002004 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.1190380762 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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