personal satisfaction is declining in large urban communities. what can be the explanation behind this ? what significant progress can be made to determine this issue.
Urban dwellers have been relatively less satisfied in their personal matters. It is true because of the overwhelming population, and the significant reduction in leisure time, health and environmental issues in the surroundings. However, it can be tackled by legislation, awareness and support schemes.
Personal dissatisfaction arises from the lack of privacy and failure to reach the acquisition in private life. Overcrowded city life often makes problems in personal life in terms of strangers, poor self-accomplishment may lead to stress and lack of relaxation. Moreover, people in urban areas apparently affect many problems with lack of space and fresh atmospheric air to become calm and tranquil to some extent compared to the countryside. In addition, pollutions and environmental problems lead to a harmful impact on health and produce major diseases in the long run. These consequences always make people in city centres less satisfied and over concerned about the future.
Nevertheless, governments and organizations can easily tackle these situations of people in the cities in a wide range of actions. Firstly, proper awareness related to personal life and privacy issues. organizations would spend plenty of time with affected people and deliver counselling and support services in a random basis. Communal functions and entertainments would be encourage and helps the people to overcome the crisis in a group basis. Furthermore, strict legislation over violation, pollutions and crimes would be mitigate the attitudes of inhabitants. Along with that, instruct the people to be satisfied in their personal life and enjoy the life as much as they can in various ways like, excursions, country side visiting, mountain climbing and so on.
to sum up, urban life often makes less satisfaction in many people. It can be minimise and improve their life in a productive ways by the support of many actions and authorities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, in addition, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46333333333 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15976616575 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556666666667 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9170840364 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.4375 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151385362475 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521976391855 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421874274651 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107619579005 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049043829832 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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