Pie graph
The pie graph presenting cultural and leisure activities of boys and girls. Both, boys and girls enjoy listening to music equally, but dramatic difference can be seen at reading activity which seems to be much more popular between girls, at even 21 %, while for boys reading is on the last place with only 2%.
There is many activities between both. The proportion of boys playing computer games is at 34 % which automatically puts computer games on the first place in activity list. The percentage of the females playing computer games is well below. Girls most popular type of activity is dancing. On the other side, dancing is not even one of the choices for boys.
There is also 11% of girls that like doing gymnastics, for boys equal percentage representing skateboarding. Boys most popular sport is basketball, followed by soccer which enjoy 17% of male children.
In general, survery shows that female's most popular activity is dancing, male children rather choose playing computer games.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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The pie graph presenting cultural and le...
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...ng is on the last place with only 2%. There is many activities between both. T...
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...on the last place with only 2%. There is many activities between both. The proportion of boys pl...
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... not even one of the choices for boys. There is also 11% of girls that like doi...
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...11% of girls that like doing gymnastics, for boys equal percentage representing s...
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.... Boys most popular sport is basketball, followed by soccer which enjoy 17% of ma...
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...ccer which enjoy 17% of male children. In general, survery shows that females m...
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to play'.
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...is dancing, male children rather choose playing computer games.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 24.0651302605 8% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 164.0 315.596192385 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07926829268 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58697593276 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603658536585 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.7889393835 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0608980902052 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379978361591 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113993508477 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0333157766173 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577046177948 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.