Planet earth cannot sustain us unless countries limit their populations.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
overpopulation has become one of the most concerning issues facing countries today because in an interconnected and interdependent world, each country should be responsible for limiting their populations. this essay agrees totally with this initiative because of the environmental and health problems caused by overpopulation.
The primary reason why becoming the causes of several contagious diseases are inevitably connect to the population growth worldwide in particular, small, fragile and conflict-affected countries, such as sub saharan africa and the least developed asian nations. overpopulation can impact tremendously on poverty rate, malnutrition and sanitation a lot. take america for instance, a person uses 160 gallons water while in africa or india they only use 5 gallons of water per day. As a result, the water scarcity and lack of food are resulting in several contagious diseases and ailments including cholera, mumps as well as chicken pox.
The second main reason is that if we do not take into consideration to eliminate overpopulation, we will face some difficulties in environmental areas. In the world, one in three humans drive a car, burn a charcoal or coal, use too much electricity and also throw wastes a lot. it will bring many side effects explicitly, connecting to rapid increase in the atmosphere of methane, carbon dioxide and greenhouse gas emissions. one of the most obvious example that shows global warming in our planet.
In conclusion, however some people will argue overpopulation is not the primary reason to tackle these issues, I believe that eliminating the growth of population would be the alternative choice, which has not only drawbacks of health issues but also, promotes the environmental disasters too. it is recommended that, the most significant solutions would be progressively empowering women and girls about the reproductive system as well as substantially eliminating dumping and minimizing the release of chemicals in the air.
The primary causes of several contagious diseases are inevitably connected to the population growth worldwide. overpopulation can impact tremendously on poverty rate, malnutrition and sanitation. this happens particularly in small, fragile and conflict-affected countries, such as sub saharan africa and the least developed asian nations. take africa or india for instance, they only use 5 gallons of water while in america a person uses 160 gallons of water per day. As a result, the water scarcity and lack of food result in several contagious diseases and ailments including cholera, mumps as well as chicken pox.
The second main issue is that if we do not take into consideration eliminating overpopulation, we will face some difficulties in environmental areas. globally, one in three humans drive cars, burn charcoal or coal, use too much electricity and also throw away a lot of waste. this will bring many side effects explicitly, connected to rapid increase in the atmosphere of methane, carbon dioxide and greenhouse gas emissions. some of the most obvious examples that show global warming in our planet.
In conclusion, however, while some people will argue that overpopulation is not the primary reason for tackling these issues, I believe that eliminating the growth of population would be the best choice, because it has not only drawbacks of health issues but also promotes the environmental disasters. I would recommend that the most significant solutions for overpopulation would be progressively empowering women and girls about the reproductive system as well as substantially eliminating dumping of waste and minimizing the release of chemicals in the air.
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- The chart below gives demographic information about the ten most populated countries from 2000 to the present as well as the projected population in 2050.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where rel 78
- TOP TEN COUNTRIES WITH THE HIGHEST POPULATION#Country2000Population2019Population2050Expected Pop.Growth Pop %2000 - 20191China1,268,301,6051,420,062,0221,301,627,04811.9 %2India1,006,300,2971,368,737,5131,656,553,63236.0 %3United States282,162,411329,093 11
- TOP TEN COUNTRIES WITH THE HIGHEST POPULATION Country 2000 Population 2019 Population 2050 Expected Pop Growth Pop 2000 2019 1 China 1 268 301 605 1 420 062 022 1 301 627 048 11 9 2 India 1 006 300 297 1 368 737 513 1 656 553 632 36 0 3 United States 282 49
- The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate. 84
- Planet earth cannot sustain us unless countries limit their populations. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 1.00243902439 1397% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 26.0 6.8 382% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 5.60731707317 535% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 33.7804878049 166% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 3.97073170732 529% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3137.0 965.302439024 325% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 568.0 196.424390244 289% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52288732394 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88187981987 3.73543355544 131% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24539743606 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 106.607317073 204% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.383802816901 0.547539520022 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1003.5 283.868780488 354% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 1.53170731707 718% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 8.94146341463 257% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.8302221434 43.030603864 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.391304348 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6956521739 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4347826087 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 1.13902439024 878% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0421482080952 0.215688989381 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0142305161579 0.103423049105 14% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318684961904 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0283840324842 0.15604864568 18% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453263145977 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 61.2550243902 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 40.7170731707 260% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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