Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment.
What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Water pollution is a globally serious problem and the top concern of environmentalists. It mainly results from human activities and causes enormous damages to both human and animal life.
First of all, it is a common fact that water pollution primarily derives from humans. We can easily see a person littering on the beach or throwing their rubbish into the river near their house, thus the bacterias or viruses in their dirty garbage would have chances to spread and pollute the water. Besides, illegal and uncontrolled fishing leads to the death of hundreds of marine animals like fish or shrimps floating on the water surface. When their bodies start to decompose, unexpected elements like dirty blood, dead cells or proteins and lipids would day by day make our water become significantly toxic and undrinkable.
Consequently, humans and animals are the victims of this problem. Nowadays, there has been a shortage of fresh water for household use in some areas of the world, especially people who live in remote wilderness, which causes regular interruptions in their industrial and daily living activities. Furthermore, the high level of carbon dioxide, sulfur or mercury in rainwater when water is evaporated from polluted lakes, rivers destroy many blocks of buildings and plants. Therefore, there wouldn't be sufficient food for us to consume and animals' natural habitats are badly affected, which results in disappearance of various species.
In conclusion, human beings have a majority of contribution to polluting the water and this problem leads to plenty of extremely negative impacts on both animal existence and human community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 490, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
... buildings and plants. Therefore, there wouldnt be sufficient food for us to consume an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33716475096 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82562828724 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64367816092 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.949624498 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.636363636 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253552518099 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943960481857 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462282897963 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163617676856 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400888466337 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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