In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people in the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
Although there have been many developments and efforts being made in agriculture, there is still a significant number of people who don't have enough food in the world. There are many reasons for this phenomenon, ranging from climate change to the unequal spread of technology globally. However, it can be addressed by support from many countries around the world and the own efforts of impoverished people to improve their quality of life.
First of all, climate change is considered to be the main drive behind the famine of some regions. Greenhouse effect, ice smelting and the Earth's warming lead to thousands of disasters like drought, flood, salinization, desertification, which minimize the farming areas and destroy harvests of many farmers, thus creating frequent food shortages. Besides, despite the incessant innovation in agriculture, many underdeveloped countries have economic crises and aren't able to afford to buy modern equipment, so their citizens can't be given financial support as well as have opportunities to investigate and apply modern farming methods. Moreover, in those countries, because of the insufficiency of money, people aren't well-educated and have to live in poor living conditions. Therefore, a majority of them have antiquated thoughts and refuse to change their old-fashioned attitudes to have a better life, which significantly hinders the process of modernization and improvement.
To resolve this serious problem, global support is indispensable. All governments should cooperate with organizations around the world to encourage people to donate money for areas suffering from food shortages so that food can be transported to them and minimize the number of deaths because of hunger. Besides, the country itself should enforce proper policies to ensure that all people in its area can have a decent education. Therefore, they can be willing to accept state-of-the-art methods and make it easy to gradually change and improve their life. What is more, the authorities of those undernourished areas ought to equip more facilities that are specialised for their farming investigation and development as well as bring experienced and well-rounded people in those areas to accompany them, teach them necessary skills and knowledge in order to help those people step by step escape from their disastrous famine and enjoy adequate lives
In conclusion, climate change and the imbalance in distributing innovation as well as the differences in development result in food shortages of many people in the world, which are possibly prevented and solved by unified assistance and financial support of all nations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, as to, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2244.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51351351351 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08903354385 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53316953317 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 709.2 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 147.251827125 49.4020404114 298% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.615384615 106.682146367 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3076923077 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177960187941 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718152276224 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499459259604 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120760818157 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726794452885 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.27 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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