Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment.
What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?
Pollution of lakes, rivers and seas is a huge worries for human who seak to protect the environment. There are a lot of possible causes of water pollution and this have a plenty of terrible influence on animal life and human society. The following essay will analyse this satemant in deepth.
At first, the citizen who have a less awareness are often litter the garbage and filthy, stinky waste into the rivers, this is the most reason of water pollution. Secondly, a lot of fishing on the ocean will reduce the ecosysterm of animal. Mass death of fish will make the sea more and more contaminate. For instance, blood of fish which was die will have a horrible influence into the enviroment, atmosphere and the ocean. Furthermore, some broken boat or ship which have oil and gas are alo the major reason for water contaminate.
All of that possible causes may lead a lot of effect on animal life and human society. At first, lake, rivers and sea is the babit of aquatic products like fish, turtle and starfish.... water pollution will reduce the number of fish and this is a terrible things to human's life. Moreover, water pollution also affect to the source of water, there will be no more fresh water for people's lìe. For example, the water which people use everyday were filter frome the river but nowadays, it is very contaminated people can not use that for using. In addition, the goverment have to pay a lot of money to improve this problem, so they will not have enough financial for the people's life and then economic, medical and all aspect of society will reduce significantly.
To conclude, water pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment, so each person need to have their own awareness to protect the environment to improve their life and the social will be better than before.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69325153374 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48031126976 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496932515337 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4766616696 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435835463061 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145527700877 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102452869705 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293435336972 0.151304729494 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106870598696 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.