Polygamy has lead to massive divorce rate around the globe? Give possible solution and discuss the reasons behind the issue?
It is incontrovertible fact the polygamy means the twice and third marriages and it is the major problem rate of divorce.Nevertheless, this essay assert that the polygamy is the causes of divorce.I will examine the possibke reasons for this trend and suggest some of the practical policies that authorities could implement to vanished the rate of divorce around the globe.
To embark with, there are plethora of reasons why the divorce rate and polygamy are increased. The first and foremost, is the understanding between the couples, because sometime man or women are uneducated while, sometime they are aged.Apart from that it factors create the misunderstanding between the marriaged couples.To epitomise, few females are uneducated and the men feel shamed when they ho their in high and educated friend circle. Last but not the least, in some conditions men are not satisfied with the women and it is the major causes of the divorce rate in the whole world.
There is almost certainly no one solution to this problem often given the complexity of its fact. The government should impose the strict law toward this problem whereas, the women should be aware about her rights. Because if the goverment impose this type of laws it man does not marriage with the two women's. The best illustrate of this, in India the laws of against the polygamy is very strict. In this country with the premission and divorce the men do not do the marriage with other women. Furthermore, the parents does not pressurized their children for the marriage.
In conculsion, there are variety of different factors that have led to make this problem worse. While, it may not be possible to find a complete solution of this, this could probably be solved by the understand and better bonding between the couples.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, third, whereas, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99333333333 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77569610889 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.9617264125 49.4020404114 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.833333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147372332885 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564330215248 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726076908955 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957051814548 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618965947251 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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