Popular hobbies ad interests change over time and more a reflection of trends and fashions than an indication of what individuals really want to do in their own time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
hobbies become one of important activities in order to relieve the stress. however, nowadays, some trends of recreation are popular for a short time and then disappear when other new trends are more famous. From my perspective, it is true that popular activities might reflect our true interests on some areas.
On the one hand, people usually choose their hobbies for popular purpose. most of teenagers follow new trends to demonstrate that they still exist and aren't out-dated with present generation but without considering their real passions. For example, last year, in 2000, because of Covid-19, most of people stayed at home and depended most on Internet, hence, there was a game called Neko Asume, which was significantly famous with cute software programs. however, this trend appeared for a short time. Furthermore, there have been several fitness trends for adults, from jogging to yoga or circuit training.
On the other hand, beside some negative sides, it is undeniable that there is still a variety of people, who follow their activities that are far from trendy. Basically, their hobbies might be the latest trend, but these people change them in order to reach their passions. one good example would be Olympic participants. they are passionate in their sports for years and find them fascinating to follow and get the awards. hobbies are the acts that cannot depend on the trend and fashion of the time.
In conclusion, people tend to chase the common trends and interests. To a certain, I agree with this statement but I believe that hobby is a personal matter and we should not change it easily due to the crowded.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, still, then, for example, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52450853438 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578754578755 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8260479058 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178698649446 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660227378126 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560470377484 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110976726832 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030427372686 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.