Popular hobbies and interests change over time and are more a reflection of
trends and fashions than an indication of what individuals really want to do in
their spare time.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for
your answer.
It is often said that we are living in an age when many of us enjoy in the popular hobbies and interests instead of spending time on what we really want to do in our spare time. In my opinion, I completely agree with this view and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs.
There are several reasons why people are ready to abandon their hobbies to follow the new things which sometimes do not really make them feel satisfied . First of all, it usually falls into those who do not have their persistent determination to defend their personal hobbies and are easily influenced by the outer effects. To illustrate this argument, the young people witness the most clear expressions for this trend. For instance, many students nowadays choose spending their weekend in the tutorial classes of maths, physics or some other natural subjects instead of studying their favorite subjects of sociological subjects because of the fact that people mostly believe that in these days, the society and the careers are in favour of the natural subjects more. Secondly, this issue is also caused by the lack of knowledge about society or themselves. In particular, many of them have the thought that they will become out of date and be laughed at people if they are unable to catch up with the fashion and trend of the time. As a result, they are in attempt to make themselves become the snobbishness. In another side, some cases fall into the situation which they do not really know what their hobby is; therefore, they always follow other people.
In conclusion, the fact that many of us tend to follow the movements which is supposed to be common in the community and forget our favorite things in the leisure time due to many different reasons. I know that we are living in the age when everything changed dizzily, it is neccessary to update the innovative trends. However, it will be boring if we only run after and give up our hobbies which make feel happy with the life.
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- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both views and give your opinion 67
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both views and give your opinion 67
- Popular hobbies and interests change over time and are more a reflection of trends and fashions than an indication of what individuals really want to do in their spare time To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your 56
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both views and give your opinion 67
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both views and give your opinion 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 153, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s do not really make them feel satisfied . First of all, it usually falls into tho...
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Line 2, column 466, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to spend'.
Suggestion: to spend
...instance, many students nowadays choose spending their weekend in the tutorial classes o...
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Line 2, column 631, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...orite subjects of sociological subjects because of the fact that people mostly believe that in these day...
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Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...orite things in the leisure time due to many different reasons. I know that we are living in t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70028818444 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46487244737 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527377521614 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.4998137188 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.461538462 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6923076923 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6153846154 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272421680839 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854023664702 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719663368081 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187508146513 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0963688653617 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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