Some people think that competitive sports have a positive effect on the education of teenagers while others argue that the effect is negative.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It could be harmful and also helpful regarding the sport competition in school education. However, regardless of the downsides of competition, I think students should pay more attention on these sport activities other than just sitting in the classroom and learning only the basic subjects.
Sport competitions not only help students learn how to collaborate with others but also help them to know themselves. It is a very good opportunity for teenagers to build up their individual personality. On the other hand, these outdoor activities may help them to release some stress from classes, and also a little competition can let them focus on other things after school.
Although some students may benefit from sport competitions, some others may not. The other thing we should consider seriously is students’ self-esteem. With competitive sports, students may lose their confidence if they care too much on the results. Furthermore, if students who cannot perform well in the game or even find out that they are not actually good at it, they may feel frustrated or isolated. At this point, I think coaches, teachers, and parents will become very important roles.
To conclude, I believe that competitive sports are still essential to education. The experiences will help students either learn more about themselves or bring them to a higher level.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...more about themselves or bring them to a higher level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, so, still, well, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26728110599 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85296260273 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63133640553 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8820309023 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.25 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142878854616 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563589431862 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384272579921 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906884592148 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030791304375 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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