At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large no. of young adults compared with the no. of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Many countries now have a large population of young people. While some people believe that this is advantageous, others are of the opinion that having the right mix of young and old people is essential for maintaining the proper balance. this essay will analyse both sides of the argument before arriving at a reasoned conclusion.
there are certainly several benefits to having more young people. To begin with, young people are more productive than old people. They are also healthier. As a result, industries have no difficulty finding the best talent. For instance, india has no scarcity of educated and skilled young people. Therefore, companies operating in the country are never short of talented people. Another advantage of having a large population of young people is their ability to bring about necessary changes in the thinking of the nation. it is a generally accepted that young people change their attitude as per the need and always challenge the old style of thinking. this helps the country to grow and gain acceptance on the global stage. young people are also healthier and need less spending on healthcare.
that said, there are also some downsides to having more young people. Youngsters need jobs and if the country cannot generate enough employment opportunities for its young population, it can be a problem. india, for example, has a high unemployment rate because it has the highest number of individuals in the age bracket of 20-40 years. Joblessness can also lead to an increase in criminal activities.
To conclude, when we look at the positive changes young people can bring about in a society it is not hard to see that the advantages of having more young people outweigh the disadvantages.
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- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 56
- At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large no. of young adults compared with the no. of older people.Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07342657343 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71161229064 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.8027635974 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6111111111 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8888888889 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234066828458 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787726876822 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566132746026 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141345373931 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520926677022 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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