At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Many countries in the world have a huge population and out of that, the majority consists of young adults. Alternatively, older people contribute to a much less percentage of the crowd. Some nations have been able to handle this situation in a positive manner while on the other hand, some countries have failed to captivate on this issue. This essay will talk about a few merits and demerits of this particular irregularity.
Firstly, not many countries in the world encounter a problem of a mammoth population crisis. However, the ones facing this have been striving to bring it under control. Talking about one of the advantages of having an enormous population of young adults is that the country is able to provide the requirement of a huge workforce. During the era of globalization, this helps many organisations to shift their manufacturing units into these territories. In addition to the job opportunities created it also helps in building economic stability in the country. Furthermore, the organisation is able to provide better quality products at a much cheaper rate. Secondly, if the country is able to implement some fundamental strategies to improve the lifestyle of its citizens like for example, providing basic education, health care, etc. it will have an educated and healthy population of youths which will help in the economic and social development of the nation.
Although a large population of youth has many advantages, we cannot neglect the idea that this also makes the country vulnerable. In the age of social media and the internet, it is very easy to divert the attention of the young generation away from their duties, which much more important. In this situation, a good population of older people becomes a necessity. They are the ones who guide the youth in a meaningful direction in their careers.
To recapitulate, having a healthy population of young adults is very important in shaping the future of the country not only economically and socially, but also culturally. But, this needs to be done under the guidance and supervision of the older section of the society. Personally, I agree that the advantages of a relatively large number of young adults over the number of older people outweighs any disadvantages.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition, talking about, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1898.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11590296496 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97487926498 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522911051213 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9432474039 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8947368421 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5263157895 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36842105263 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27117661858 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767714589359 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725637193816 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173343136753 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665239751431 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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