At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do you think that the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Currently, in some nations, the number of the young is higher than that of the old. From my perspective, this brings some benefits to these countries in terms of economy and society.
First of all, a developed economy is the most significant advantage that young people can offer to their country. To explain, those young ones who are full of energy and enthusiasm will contribute a great deal of profits to both companies and nations through working diligently to increase high productivity, whereas the elderly, due to the ageing process, can easily be absent-minded and face some health issues while dealing with the heavy workload. Moreover, with a skilled workforce, corporations would have a chance to produce extra goods, which makes them capable of expanding their businesses and trades in a global market. As a result, the development of each organization will generate additional government revenues to overcome the financial difficulties of the country.
Besides the economy, a large young population could help to tackle social problems. For one thing, the fewer elderly people are, the less fund needed to cater for them. Taxes from the public are spent on the needs of old people, and authorities have the responsibility for providing free healthcare systems and also shelters. Hence, if there is a high proportion of them, benefits may not be offered to all. Consequently, economic stagnation is inevitable since there will not be enough money to invest in other fields such as industry, science and education. This also causes the young generation to be under pressure since they have to support a great number of elders.
In conclusion, it seems true that the positives provided by this phenomenon outweigh the negatives in terms of the economic and social aspects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, thus, whereas, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18620689655 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82384108583 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631034482759 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1890782746 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.692307692 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0769230769 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163481008322 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557291784537 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519692659431 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992614536236 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463949899298 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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