At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do you think that the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Over the past few years, the phenomenon of the increasing youth population accounted for the highest proportion compared with the aged group. Though this prevailing phenomenon would reap an array of benefits, I partially comply that its downsides need taking into consideration.
On the one hand, there are a few advantages why many hold a belief that younger population could bring a variety of beneficial ramification in human’s life. The first efficient advantage of this trend is that the younger has a robust state of health compared with the greying population. In fact, by availing this effective merit, the rate of diseases in the youth population would be mitigated, which makes a great contribution to curbing the enormous pressure on welfare state when the budget is stretched thin for any governments. Thanks to this trend, the fiscal resources of a nation can be allocated properly on other aspects such as education, goods production and among others. Another fact is that the development of being creative of younger population could bring forward the beneficial influence of the economy. To be more specific, to facilitate human-living conditions, the producers are likely to enhance the productivity to satisfy the consumer’s demand, and thus the younger population could offer creative and measure effective not only to lift the producers out of this problem but also reinforce the economy of a country.
On the contrary, despite these attractions, its detrimental effects are perpetually a crippling problem for the resident’s life. First and Foremost, in an
increasing number of people who look for stable and well-paid occupations that is a large drawback of this trend due to the excessive competition between them is the main culprit of leading the high unemployment figure. Consequently, this may pose danger to the society since the unemployed may turn on the crime of passion with the sole objective to earn money maintaining their life. Furthermore, being devoid of work experiences seem to be a disadvantage of the youth. In the reality, this disadvantage could throw their enterprises in onerous situations because of from their minute mistakes to being enormous, which spurs plethora of burdens to not only their business but also the economic stride of a nation.
In conclusion, as cited mentioned above, while this phenomenon could offer a multitude of merits, I concur with the idea of its downsides bring numerous adverse corollaries to the human’s life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many holds
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sident’s life. First and Foremost, in an increasing number of people who look for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, look, may, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2110.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30150753769 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98478926313 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562814070352 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.5321386077 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.714285714 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4285714286 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140454205227 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475862392503 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323161894431 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0635002324255 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383234797425 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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