At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of the young aldults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages ?
Nowadays, many nations are facing with the raise of the young in comparation with the elder. This trend may have its own benefits and drawbacks that essay will express.
On the one hand, it is the fact that the older people are likely having more experience rather than the younger. That is because, the knowledge is usually assembled day by day and year by year. Therefore, in many cases, older people can make the effective decisions and it it can be seen that the important position in institutions are almost all the middle age, not the youngsters.
On the other spectrum, the youngers tend to be more open-minded which does wonder for accepting the new developments. These creativitive and reckless traits help the younfer punctually grasp the coming opportunities. Furthermore, because of living in the digitalization and autonomous industry, the youngers have advantages to broaden their horizon then apply their knowledge in order to improve country's social economy. Subsequently, many developing countries can catch the pace with the developped. A good example of it would be Viet Nam, the country which is known that suffering a lot of wars in the past and economy did not have any hightlights. However, this is the country which have young-age population so with the talents, the youngster are step by step giving their own to build a such beautiful country not only full of amenities but also improvements of living standard for all the residents. Understandbly, it might be difficult to make this come true without the youngsters' hand.
In conclusion, I will not deny that the older play a vital role for a vigorous economy as well as the ideal life however, this should be accompanied with the youngsters in the light of aforementioned reasons. That means, to making a develop country, the younger and older people should be responsible together no matter what generation we are living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: it
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...entioned reasons. That means, to making a develop country, the younger and older people s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, in conclusion, as well as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0253164557 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88710979706 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582278481013 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.544980853 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.428571429 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149396009719 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489136139973 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396162322736 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909121689663 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220482461466 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.