At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the numbers of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Now a days, due to some factors such as rampant procreation, some contries around the globe emcpmpass younger amount of citizens when compared to the senior ones. This phenomena have both pros and cons. In this essay I will discause the two.
A huge chunk of population in some countries, especially east-asian ones, are built from youngsters who can he quiet beneficial for different aspects of the society. For example, China uses a young, energetic work force which is leading the country to be one of the economic powers of the area. Moreover, involving huge number of young adults in the work fields, or scientific areas can help inovation due to the high creativity proportion youngsters hold in themselves. Therefore, possesing great amount of youngful workpeople is truely advantagous.
Although devoting the majority of jobs and responsibilities to young adults could be useful, there are some concerns appearing with this situation. Firstly, young people lack sufficient experience and knowledge to overcome important responsibilities. To do significant tasks, these people should use the try and trial methode which is quiet costly and energy consuming. As a result, the government might face a great deal of errors in the field of economics and politics. To illustrate, having a senior, wisdomous attorney in the court to solve an international debate between multiple countries is far more logical than entering a person who has just finished collage in the field.
In conclusion, while decreasing age of people in the society and workplaces is beneficial with out a doubt, having knowledgeable, aged mentors and supervisours are also vital to cover the harms and disadvantages accompanying the growth of the number of young adults in some countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30960854093 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03771208062 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64768683274 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.3624396784 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.769230769 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235197143257 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665033524669 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046496627215 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128330062641 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297784507043 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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