some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The fact that how much of the scientific, academic and business data should be shared publicly has been conserning scientist for a long time. While some experts might argue that researchers are obligated to share their findings with the world, the rest suggest that preserving some of those is necessary.
Some people believe all scientific advanses have to be publicly announced. They express that due to this fact that the academic researches are funded by people's taxes, it is their true right to be informed about these facts and datas. Moreover, by sharing this novelle information, people can enhance their business, rise their income, and overall live a more comfortable life.
While people advocating for the idea of over-sharing information might have a solid point, some argue that sharing every new findings with ordinary people can do more harm than good. Firstly, new findings in the academic world often lack the supporting data to be trusted. Therefore, sharing it with people might misslead them. Changes in the academic world is immensly dramatic. As a result, there is no need to confuse people by throwing a lot of unvalid information on them.
Secondly, some discoveries, espetially in the field of biology and sociology, might increase racisme and descrimination toward diverse groups and ethnicities. Beacuse most people lack the knowledge to comprehend these informations accurately, it is prefered to keep these findings between proficients.
In conclusion, although sharing all the new scientific datas can have pros and cons, I believe preserving some of this data can be more beneficial, and the result of all people being involved in the fields they know nothing about might be a harmful act.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25631768953 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77305200264 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559566787004 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6308753763 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332680623047 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120214500968 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512350915942 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186231774105 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451126229403 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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