At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
The population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.Unbalanced population, a widely accepted as an alarm for any nation, is a heated-up subject. The ratio between youngsters and old generation people are relatively high, and it creates a concern for some nations. I think this situation will be more beneficial as the younger people can be more useful for society than older one. I will elaborate on my point of view through following paragraphs.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is the impacts of young population on our economic systems. As we know, the younger we are, the more energetic we can work. Older people are not able to labour physical work or even the sensitive work that maybe put lots of pressure on them, like Accountants that need lots of concentration that older could not do it well due to their aging disease like Alzheimer! However, younger one are more motivated and enthusiastic to do any jobs that are related to their field and interest without considering its hardness or stress. Additionally, The adolescent, are more vigorous to work, compared to older one. We could not ignore the role of elder's experience in our society, but eventually, the younger people are who that can play cardinal role in our society Financial development.
The second reason that I like to bring up to support my idea is that younger people has more modern information and data which they have been learnt in their university, that are earned from the newest events and researchers in the world. Their witting is more update and is more related to the universal researches, that can be useful, to be executed in our society economic system. Without following the science of younger and their innovative idea, the society neither be progressed, nor be successful, therefor it will be stagnated. Younger people are more motivated to do researches and earn new strategy that can be practical.
To make the long story short, I believe that the younger people can have a monumental influence in the development of our society especially in the economic field. Consequently, by using, elder experience, young scientist idea and adolescence energy, we could help our nation to progress.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 127, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Unbalanced
...ompared with the number of older people.Unbalanced population, a widely accepted as an ala...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, may, second, so, thus, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03439153439 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85310438672 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518518518519 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.535913767 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.866666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157100476668 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572814904681 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105668100491 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105518582631 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119825205027 0.056905535591 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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