At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In recent years, the proportion of younger generation has been higher than elder people. While I believe that there are many benefits to this circumstance, there are also some drawbacks to consider. In this essay, I will support my view with examples.
The most significant disadvantage is that older generations are the inspiration to the youngsters in many aspects. The reason for this is that they are well experienced and matured when compared to young adults. To illustrate, my father always motivates me to get back on my feet when ever I feel disappointed. He always makes sure that I do not ever get tricked into incorrect path in my life. This is because, the elders have traversed lot more stages in life and they know how exactly to fight and achieve something.
On the other hand, there is a saying “Today’s younger generations are tomorrow’s nation”. Over the last few years, technology has been greatly advanced and this is mostly because of the young and intellectual adults. For instance, SpaceX is a private space exploration technology corporation which employs around 7000 brainy young people. They have had many achievements such as launching a liquid filled rocket for the first time, introducing a heavy falcon test flight and so on. To add another example, we can see that today’s young entrepreneurs are setting up their own startups and being creative to develop their own products.
In conclusion, while there are a few disadvantages with this situation, I believe that there are remarkable benefits that are to be taken into consideration. Eventually, development of the nation is what matters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, well, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17910447761 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1058227568 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615671641791 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5107631282 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13632519237 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044784862625 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388468257467 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783885325692 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0126238347357 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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