Contemporary society is the recent times, has been inundated with the plethora of diseases. To spread awareness among the people about this out break of diseases, it is well said "prevention is better than cure". thereby, some are off the belief, it is better to invest in preventive measures rather than finding a cure. I, however, do not completely agree with the former notion. I am of the opine that research and cure are as important or more so than preventive measures. The below essay will discuss my opinion with relevant examples.
On one hand, preventive measures are indubitably pivotal, they promote a sense of curiosity among the masses. For instance, preventive measures were imperative to overcome the notorious COVID-19 virus. Furthermore, immediate preventive measures taken by some countries, curbed the cases of COVID-19. However, without proper research about the virus, preventive measures would have been alienated to us. To exemplify, it was pivotal to know the path of transmission of the virus. Thereby intensive research went on for months, it was found out that MOD (mode of transmission) was through body fluids like salivary droplets. Therefor, the masses where advised to keep mouth masks on, oblige with the social distancing protocol. This help to curb the disease in many countries.
On the contrary, not all diseases can be stopped just by preventive measures alone, finding a cure to these diseases is imperative. For example, small pox a deadly virus that had millions of casualties few decades ago. However, thanks to research, a cure was found which eradicated the virus for good. Moreover, the introduction of vaccination aided to build up passive immunity against the virus, which aided in the long run.
Additionally, research was always the back bone of modern medicine, without it would be impossible to cure many of the modern diseases. Not only does research help us to know more about the virus or bacteria, but also the cure and preventive measures that can be adopted to better prevent the pathogen for causing harm.
To conclude, preventive measure are without a doubt important, However, investing in research has historically proven to be more valuable. Therefor, in my opinion research should not be undermined.
TO conclude,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1933.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2527173913 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84591575281 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559782608696 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2802575631 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8636363636 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368037502584 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976859310544 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929396030398 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211366833649 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066359404132 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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