In today's world, the technology has been an unprecedented which can be witnessed around the globe. Numerous people in the world consider university education to be the key factor to success. I strongly opine that a person needs to be creative, imaginative and talented to succeed. Merely, achieving university education can restrict ones creativity and imagination towards success.
Commencing the discussion, education is of great significance to survive in this competitive world. Besides, it makes a person self reliant to explore the wide opportunities around the globe, hence making a person a constructive opportunist. contrarily, solely attaining university education can be considered unsuitable to attain success. Success is more dependent on creatively implying the skill sets with consistently working diligent to reach a certain goal. For instance, there are many business men such as Elon musk, who are involved with technology in a highly innovative manner. Knowing the fact that these business minded aspirants are not too much involved with the university education but, they have the sense of applying their skill sets and creative innate capabilities in a very productive manner.
Reinforcing my perspective further, numerous business magnates such as Elon musk and Bill gates have not given importance to the university education but, they have applied their imagination, skill sets and innovative ideas in the right place. Today, innumerable highly intellectual university graduates work for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, if, so, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70869565217 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09222147467 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630434782609 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5693047732 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.416666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160451852348 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610787071372 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599799930221 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0869745922128 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669995619014 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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