Public funds should be spent on individuals who participate in international sports events rather than on local sports players.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is an undeniable fact that sport has been one of the most reasons bringing an honour to every country at international level. However, it has been debated that tax payers' money should be spent on international athletes rather than grassroots sport player.
There are a number of primary reasons for investing in international sport players. Firstly, when they partake in international sporting events with outstanding performance, they will promote the country image. Moreover, they bring the country to a height even win the recognition of friends around the world especially. In addition, they serve as role models for young generation. For example, Anh Vien is a swimming athlete, she has great merit in encouraging sporting movements as grassroots levels.
One of the main reasons why the national budget should be spent on local sporting events is that the main purpose of public fund is to benefic as many citizen as possible. The most effective way is invest in local sport. For instance, if the government funds a local swimming training program for children, it will bring benefits for both children and parents. Last but not least, such investments will help create an environment for people to show and develop their sport talent and they will have more opportunity to become an international sport player.
In conclusion, a funding balance should be stuck between the two ends of the spectrum.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun citizen seems to be countable; consider using: 'many citizens'.
Suggestion: many citizens
...purpose of public fund is to benefic as many citizen as possible. The most effective way is ...
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Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'invested'.
Suggestion: invested
... as possible. The most effective way is invest in local sport. For instance, if the go...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1188.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1652173913 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81383296495 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604347826087 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8469365096 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284377902035 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107397645556 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811845419315 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16879895984 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583313755642 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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