Q2 : At the present time, most people do not seem to lead healthy lifestyles. What are the reasons and how can we solve these problems?
Recently, the issue of unhealthy lifestyles has become the subject of heated debate. There are several reasons for this phenomenon, such as unhealthy eating habits, and various measures to alleviate this issue, including launching a campaign. In this essay, I will explain the reasons for this undesirable trend, and present some solutions to the problem.
There do seem to be numerous causes underlying this phenomenon. Perhaps the most oft-cited cause is that the availability of fast food has increased a great deal. To be specific, international fast food chains are easily found in every major city, which often causes working adults who find it difficult to manage their time to consume such food which is high in fat, sugar, and salt. Another fundamental cause is that in a fiercely competitive society, people are often obliged to perform well and devote huge amounts of time and energy to ameliorating relevant skills for their jobs. This often causes them to become less engaged in physical activities, exerting a detrimental influence on their health.
There are, however, several courses of action that both the government and individuals could take to address the root cause of the problems. The most practical solution to this problem is a government-sponsored awareness campaign. An effective advertising campaign could warn of the dangers of lack of consumption of wholesome food and hopefully, raise awareness amongst the public. For example, the UK recently lobbied their citizens to eat five portions of fruit and vegetables per day and this resulted in a dramatic decrease in the obesity rate. A second feasible solution would be for the masses to take exercise on a regular basis, making it possible for them to have an improved quality of their physical and mental well-being.
In conclusion, the aforementioned problems have resulted from a variety of causes suggested above and can be tackled with a number of solutions. If every sector of our society makes a concerted effort, we can combat the problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21646341463 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88413828442 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594512195122 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0730764672 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.066666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108498664428 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039267045432 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349645336597 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0670940723315 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274179699947 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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