Nowadays many people start buying their needs through online stores. And this behaviour is growing rapidly, and more customers have shift to shop solely via online shops. Also, most of the big physical stores start creating online platforms for their brands, which helps greatly their clients to shop from it. As great as it sounds, but shopping online has some negatives aspects on both the ordinally people and the firms, which I will discuss it later on.
Firstly, one of the amazing benefits we as customers get is the ability to buy what we desire from anywhere in the world. And that has a lot of advantages for instance, if your local shop for shoes doesn't supply a certain shoe that you like very much, you can simply order it online from different store whether that store was in your country or outside it. Secondly, the wide of options of products that you have at the moment to search from, which is only one click away from you due to spread of websites that sell anything you want.
Thirdly, as a company that sell only offline, moving to selling online will generate a huge revenues comparing to staying only offline. In addition, by opening an online branch of your stores will attract and create new customers base from all over the world. Therefore, your brand's name will be known almost everywhere.
On the other hand, shopping online has a dangerous side. First, you as normal person could be a fraud victim of a fake online store. Moreover, as your order online and you only see the pictures of the product you want, the product that you will receive might be something completely different than what you ordered. And as a company that is new to the e-commerce world, you will face some difficulties running the the website and the customers orders.
Finally, as you could see that online shopping has become the choice of a lot of people to buy what they want. Also, like anything in life it has some bad impacts which by time will be less and less.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65242165242 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23016332604 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532763532764 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2969343615 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0625 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9375 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9375 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257021007311 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951356597073 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075488462003 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14963960383 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546565707124 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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