Question: Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. What are the
problems? What should governments and individuals do to tackle these problems?
Overcrowding of metropolitan is a serious problem confronting us in the mordern society. Several problems have resulted from this tendency and this essay will examine this issue and suggest some solutions for it.
Several related problems can be anticipated when the overpopulation of cities is increasing. One issue associated with this is unemployment rate due to people from rural ereas migrate to cities to search for job oppurnities. This can be evidenced by the proportion of job applications in Viet Nam between 2019-2022 significantly icreased. Further pressure is that there are problem like traffic congestion and crime. If the public transport system is poor, people will overuse private vehicles. In fact, massive exhausted emissions released from means of transport have exacarbated air pollution as well as environment.
In order to resolve this problem, there are several actions that could be taken to eradicate the problems described. First of all, a simple solution would be that the government would introduce new laws such as they can allocate some factories, companies and waive the imposition tax for companies in order to promote many opportunities for those who are unemployed. The second measures would be funding more green technology and spending more on public transport to upgrate people’s safety. For example, the use of electrics cars and renewable will reduce the quanity of toxic exhaust fumes.Finally, individuals also have the conciousness/ awareness about having responsible for well-being of their citizens.
In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise as overpopulation of cities
- Question Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems What are the problems What should governments and individuals do to tackle these problems 61
- Question Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems What are the problems What should governments and individuals do to tackle these problems 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: problems
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, second, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52529182879 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05857367042 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614785992218 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8693464019 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.230769231 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152228105835 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675882470101 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730397339562 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115648206606 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378144265662 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.