Question: Some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult while others believe that it is getting easier.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is believed by some people that life in big cities seems tougher whereas others think the opposite. While acknowledge the benefits of living in such places, I personally agree with those who are convinced that it is causing more difficulties for citizens.
On the one hand, there are several obvious reasons why some people think living in big cities is easier and more pleasant. There are greater job opportunities or career prospects in urban areas, which attracts a large number of immigrants. For instance, since most big companies and factories which offer good incomes are often found in cities, graduates will have more chances there to find jobs suited to their qualifications. Another important factor is the variety of places to go for entertainment like cinemas, shopping malls or amusement parks in large urban areas. It means that city residents have more places to visit and enjoy during their free time.
On the other hand, I would argue that some aspects of urban life are making it harder for city dwellers. First, since the population density in big cities is high, there are more private vehicles like cars or motorbikes on the roads. Consequently, there is an increase in the level of exhaust fumes and traffic congestion, which leads to a deterioration in air quality and that damages people's health. Second, the cost of living in these areas including rent, rental fee, household expenses and taxes is constantly rising. As a result, those from impoverished families or students fail to make ends meet and have to live in squalor.
In conclusion, despite some advantages of living in big cities, I strongly believe that it is getting more difficult and stressful for the residents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, second, so, well, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04225352113 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66828002838 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602112676056 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6901708577 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.153846154 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274062517176 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944413845162 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939035917018 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189539880214 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681179052544 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.