In contemporary era, It is irrefutable that Petty crime among adolescent is growing concern and few well known scientist argue that fundamental cause behind this is juveniles these days are not learning simple virtue and societal norms form guardians and tutors. Which is not the appropriate way of thinking as there are many other rudimentary reasons behind these menace. This essay will delve into these view with supporting details and suitable illustrations owing to reach logical conclusion
To commence with, there are few vital and basic reason to be considered as increase in offence among youngsters. Firstly, children exposure to violent movies and TV show as young ones are naïve and they do not know what is right and what is wrong and they think this is the way to behave with society then crime is inevitable. For instance, recent survey says that youngsters were trying to imitate violent stunts after watching action movie in theater. Moreover, online games , particularly action games, which definitely enthralling the juveniles and made them to commit petty crimes. To exemplify, in the recent newspaper a news about child belong to Punjab killed his father and mother for not getting him new phone to play mobile games. Finally, now in the world under 18 children are also doing work for living and in the same context unemployment is another reason of become convicts.
Some people claim that guardians and tutors and unable to teach them liability toward the society. As majority of our education is based on intellectual and practical knowledge there is know space for social and emotional learning during school time and at the same consumerist society made both parent workaholic. So parents have no time to teach their child how to behave in society.
In conclusion, after deep introspecting into reasons pertaining to violence among minors I am of the firm belief that elementary reason for crime among children is exposure to bad movies, video games and unemployment due to which world will become nasty place to live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, well, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09821428571 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60367453092 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.1371685444 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.75 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30210989127 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083424594008 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390436988426 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144787248865 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457274804049 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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