In recent times, economic growth has helped many become richer, both in developed and developing countries. However, those in developed countries are not as happy as they were in the past. Why is this? What can be learned from this?
Although economic growth has contributed to increase the number of rich civilians in both developing and developed countries, people in developed countries feel as not satisfied with their life as they did in the past. It is caused by several reasons and also provide us various valuable lessons. I will present my viewpoints in this essay below.
On the on hand, the economic growth brings beneficial effects on people’s life. The fact is that when the economy develops, workers have more potential job opportunities; therefore, they can increase their average income. As the result, the percentage of upper-income citizens as the development of economy has experienced an accelerating trend in the recent years. A prime example is the hospitality industry which has been the million-dollar industry over the last decade. As the income of inhabitants rises, they would rather travel and enjoy their stay in luxury hotels than stay home. Therefore, the annual revenue of hotels increases dramatically and the hoteliers become richer than they did in the past.
On the other hand, wealthy people not always feel happy with their achievement. The fundamental reason for this is that the higher amount of money successful businessmen earn, the more tremendous pressure they have to work under. For instance, the proportion of Japanese suiciding as working stressfully has been grown unprecedentedly. The high workload mitigate the time spending for social relationships of workers and cause several mental health problems such as anxiety disorder, depression. Therefore, human beings should balance their career ambition and their life to live more meaningfully.
To sum up, despite the fact that the economic growth provides people many opportunities to become wealthier, people should balance between work and other social activities to reduce stress in the daily life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, for instance, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50171821306 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89617132835 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59793814433 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5629479097 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.733333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227971585978 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611975850144 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773200379727 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134669981428 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0916802943429 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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