In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?
It is certainly true that, number of family members and their roles have changed continuously in recent year. This essay will suggest that, independent family decision is the biggest advantage of this and reduce family bonding to strengthen the family relation is the primary drawbacks.
With regards to the positive concern, people nowadays are more conscious regarding nuclear family size and their positive impact on individual decision making process. Nuclear family stand out with less numbers where closeness among the members can exist and it will further helpful to solve the family problems. On top up this, each member can have the access of family information and they can independently make a family decision which is direct beneficial to the family concern as well as to the self. As a result of that, more happiness among the family member can be seen which may not be happen in joint family system. A recent study conducted by Tribhuwan University found that, people from nuclear family are more free and happy with their decision making process then the other type of family.
Those oppose to this say that, limited number of members within the family have to fulfill the need of the family and they get very less time to support their family at the time of need. People in this competitive world have to pay enough time in regards to fulfill the professional responsibility and they get multiple stress relating to fulfilling the job duties along with the need of dependent children within the home. As a consequent of that, head of the family members in certain time feel very poor relating to the personal obligation for not being able to support their family in timely manner.
In conclusion, small size of family members in the nuclear family system would have more freedom to make independent decision as an advantage whereas the level of trust will be decline among the members as a significant drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 199, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun numbers is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... process. Nuclear family stand out with less numbers where closeness among the membe...
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Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...mpetitive world have to pay enough time in regards to fulfill the professional responsibility...
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Line 4, column 221, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'drawback'?
Suggestion: drawback
...line among the members as a significant drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, regarding, so, then, well, whereas, as to, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97530864198 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49258158602 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484567901235 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.761102029 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.545454545 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4545454545 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211956612338 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105539688363 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451240817995 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144214003725 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546982617909 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.