In recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world increasing. Discuss this issue. Give reasons and solution.

Nowadays, a growing number of youngsters are reported to have engaged in nefarious activities such as theft, prostitution, fraud and drug trafficking, and this disturbing phenomenon has raised considerable concerns about an escalation of youth crimes in major metropolises around the world. In order to delve deeply into this issue, this essay will explore the primary causes of this social problem and provide feasible solutions to this situation.
In fact, juvenile delinquency is ascribed to peer influence and social media. To begin with, there is some evidence that peer influence correlates strongly with the rising crime rate among young people. Youngsters who lack parental care tend to seek emotional support and self-recognition from their peers. However, these neglected adolescents may go astray or even perpetrate heinous crimes if they are adversely affected by their peers. For instance, their villainous friends may inveigle them into joining criminal gangs and then compel them to engage in illegal activities. Being subjected to the intimidation and violence of their peers, these young people have little choice but to commit the criminal offense.
In addition, social media is the second factor accountable for the increase in youth crimes. It is generally acknowledged that juvenile delinquency is inextricably intertwined with the exposure to violence, pornography and fraud transmitted by media such as TV shows, movies and the Internet. If teenagers frequently receive information containing abusive language and physical violence from media, they not only imitate and internalize the aggressive behavior but also resort to violence when they see no other way to address their personal problems. Moreover, pornographic and fraudulent messages conveyed by media usually mislead young people into believing that they can use their body and deception to obtain money.
Despite the rampant crimes that plague contemporary society, there are two preventive measures that we can take to check the growth in juvenile delinquency. First, parents and teachers should shoulder the responsibility for supervising and educating young people. For example, they have an obligation to inculcate in children socially acceptable values and norms, reinforcing the ideas of observing laws, pursuing justice and condemning crime. Furthermore, it is incumbent upon parents and teachers to help youngsters select their friends and steer them away from the media detrimental to their character development. Additionally, media censorship is another strategy to prevent young people from being morally contaminated by the inappropriate messages. Violent or sexual TV shows, for instance, cannot be displayed until 11 p.m. every day whereas legislators should pass the law that requires Internet companies to filter or block the violent-and-sex-filled content. Although some people contend that media censorship infringes on people’s right to freedom of expression, this restriction ensures young people have no access to the information that induces them to perpetrate crimes.
To recapitulate, juvenile delinquency is a complex problem that draws a lot of people’s attention. There is no single cause of this phenomenon, but the two factors such as peer influence and social media are the two main contributors to the rising crime rate. Nevertheless, if the aforementioned precautions are taken into account, significant decreases in delinquency might be achieved.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, then, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2963.0 1615.20841683 183% => OK
No of words: 517.0 315.596192385 164% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73114119923 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76839952204 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10462408442 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 300.0 176.041082164 170% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580270793037 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 912.6 506.74238477 180% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4843148549 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.681818182 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77272727273 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147277431435 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040041877131 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434152093651 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848987807254 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509824732013 0.056905535591 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.25 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 174.0 78.4519038076 222% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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