In recent years, the proportion of the crimes committed by youngsters is on the rise. Discuss the cause of this problem and suggest solutions.
In recent decades, the increase in the amount of juvenile delinquencies has become a hot debate in our daily life. There are a wide range of factors that account for adolescents’ strong aggressive and criminal tendencies in this modern society and some of them will be discussed in this essay, followed by some appropriate solutions.
One of the leading reasons for juvenile crimes is the loss of family life. Living in such a hustle and bustle world currently, adults need to spend the majority of time to pursue their career with a view to supporting a sufficient life and catching up with this fast-changing world. As a result, youngsters may suffer from the lack of guidance from their parents and have a higher chance of acting by instinct which are likely to boost several violent behaviors. Furthermore, the significant breakthroughs of the technology give youngsters more access to a variety of action films or online games which contain violent scenes as well as possible crimes including robbery, murder and so on. Needless to say, the mentioned kinds of movies have a fundamental impact on adolescents that they may have the tendency to follow and imitate. Consequently, because of this in addition to lack of parents’ care, the number of law-breaking behaviors amongst youngsters will absolutely rise.
Several ways which can somehow diminish the frequency of this issue should be taken into consideration. To begin with, parents who are partly responsible for this problem should pay more attention to the growth of their children. Though they have relatively little time at home due to their overwhelmed working tasks, it is highly recommended for them to interact more as well as direct their children to a small-scale rule among family members and have punishments when it is needed. With increasing time spent with adults, not only do youngsters improve their violent behaviors, family can also be beneficial due to the closer connection between children and parents. Moreover, the government should lend their hand to overcome this rising troubles from the young. National educational campaigns, behaving culture classes, and so forth which aim at children at early age should be organized to reduce the number of wrongdoings during the period when children are growing up. Additionally, severe punishments even including prison sentences can be also crucial whenever the juvenile delinquency occurs.
In conclusion, family and media are the most influential factors of youngsters' crimes, however, several aforementioned suggestions should be taken into account to relieve this alarming issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 370, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2214.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 415.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33493975904 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90016392487 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58313253012 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 681.3 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.8082024756 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.375 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9375 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139025945563 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464748982691 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371791592101 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902935170779 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184928691573 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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