Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life.
Which do you consider to be the major influence?
Many societies nowadays believe that genetics play a more important role in an individual’s life. Although I accept the view, I still agree with that people could not decide whether genetic characteristics have more effects on a person, and this would be discussed in the following essay.
There are several reasons why people might approve the view that inherited characteristics could dictate one’s destiny. Firstly, as everyone has unique genes, people are different from others. While some people are easy going, others might be melancholic. Secondly, the right of choosing genetic characters is not given to people, and these characters would develop as people grow up. For example, a boy who possesses the outstanding gift for painting is possible to become an artist in the future.
In spite of arguments above, in my view, the situation and experiences that people encounter have deeper influence, Experiences are so powerful and unpredictable that they could boost or over-ride other influences, since every individual is always affected by his or her circumstances, such as education, workplaces. For example, a person who is born as a sanguine person, but raised in a broken family; therefore, he would become pessimistic every day. For another example, an individual who is not particularly talented but with top resources at his every life stage is more likely to succeed than a genius without any opportunities.
In conclusion, while nature could influence a person, in my opinion, nurture is giving more effect on person’s development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in my view, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40243902439 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10666193908 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642276422764 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4590845359 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.818181818 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3636363636 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3636363636 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159711482427 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548213404004 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451787328441 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101428684773 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423609798025 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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