Research into new types of medicine and treatments are essential for improving health and deal with diseases. Who do you think should fund these researches: private companies, individuals or governments?
It is thought that medical researches into new categories of medicine and methods of treaments play a crucial role in bettering people’s health as well as curing their illnesses. I am firmly of the opinion that private firms and governments should finance these studies, because private corporations can gain profits and governments take responsibilites to ensure citizens’ well-being.
To begin with, it has been demonstrated that private businesses are able to make money by investing in these researches. Private companies can afford the excorbitant cost of studies into the medical field. When researchers uncover new medicines and treaments, these companies consider them as a business model and accquire a patent, after which they get profits by exclusively selling to the public. In fact, so many wealthy people have been willing to pay for their cures. A good example of this is a private well-known company named VinMec in VietNam. This company earns a lot of money by researching and developing into vaccines for Covid-19, before selling to Vietnamese people.
Moreover, governments pay attention to people’s health, because of their duty. Given the fact that citizens have contributed a large amount of money to government by paying taxes, so that they spend a huge sum of money on medical studies in order to improve health, which leads to those who work more productively and effectively and each country’s development. This is evidenced by Vietnam’s government which invests part of the public’s budget in producing vaccines against Corona virus.
In conclusion, I concur that private companies and governments pay out for medical stuties, because these companies are capable of making money from them and governments are more responsible for/in charge of the public. All in all, both of these organizations should invest in the project.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37201365188 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96785497796 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576791808874 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.9613478356 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.076923077 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288524547049 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966376477051 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450407355979 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174129004446 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514025259719 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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