Research shows that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Research shows that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Since the advent of the internet, face-to-face business events have become less appealing in the modern life. In fact, many meetings, discussions and training are being organized online these days. While this tendency brings some benefits, there are more disadvantages to consider.

To begin with, organizing these events on the internet is beneficial in several ways. Since it only requires a computer and internet connection, people can easily arrange their meetings within a few clicks, which is supper convenient and also saves a large amount of time and budget. Indeed, many businessmen have been utilizing the internet for private meetings and small conferences rather than spending budget on venue renting. Moreover, while people are communicating online, they can still be able to do other personal tasks compared to traditional meetings where they only have discussions to focus on.

However, this tendency might have some undesirable demerits. Firstly, if entrepreneurs overuse the internet to converse with the others, they will likely become lazier to meet in person, which might affect people’s social experience. Because they do not want to meet face to face, individuals may miss opportunities to expand their connections to the next potential business clients referred by the existing ones. Secondly, unlike real life atmosphere where businessmen can cultivate more interests from the others, meeting on the internet creates a neutral environment where people only want to hang up as quickly as possible. Thus, group work between partners could not be as effectively co-operative as conventional meetings.

In conclusion, while online business meetings offer some merits, the disadvantages of this way somewhat outweigh the advantages.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, in conclusion, in fact, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63909774436 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90200240432 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65037593985 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5013267677 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.384615385 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125014694218 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492843462823 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671345499448 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105105692555 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690506661916 0.056905535591 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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