Some people think a job not only provides income but also social life. Others think it is better to develop social life with people you do not work with. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different views about whether they should take a job to boost personal social experience or making friend outside of work is better to develop their social life. In my opinion, I believe having a constant occupation is a greater option for the people to improve their social skills and also income.
On the one hand, securing a career offers great opportunities to expand both individuals’ connections and assets. By meeting people from work, ones can have a chance to learn the experience of their particular field from the other co-workers. In time, people can prove their capability of self-improving and socializing skills. Such qualities help individuals highlight themselves in front of their managers, which eventually gets them further in their own careers. Furthermore, being well-known among colleagues means people are reliable to handle future projects of their workplace, which can enrich their own assets when successful.
On the other hand, making friends with people who do not work in the same field is not useful for people’s social life. Research indicates that people can only socialize with under 300 acquaintances which seems to be just a small number to some individuals. However, such amount is equal to an average number of workers in one company. Therefore, it is wiser for a person to expand his connection to 300 surrounding co-workers instead of creating friendships with the people who are outside of the company. With the same amount of friends, people gain more benefits from colleagues than strangers.
In conclusion, I believe people should choose to have a stable job in order to improve their social life rather than making friends with the people whom they do not work with.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20284697509 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83583675244 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572953736655 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5549149163 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.461538462 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341181481554 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128787451456 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108631950612 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238301447518 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877375685749 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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