Research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to
prison commit crimes when set free. What are the reasons? What can be
done to solve the problem?
It is true that a large number of criminals go back to illegal activities after being released from jail. There are a number of reasons behind this phenomenon and several solutions should be adopted to improve the situation. There are two primary reasons why the offenders tend to repeat their wrongdoings.
One reason is that the prison is regarded as a punishment location in which captures criminals. However, punishment is not a sufficiently effective measure to convert offenders to honest living. Furthermore, during the period of being captive, the criminals are feasible to associate with other criminals. These bad company could seduce offenders to build up a network for future crimes. Fortunately, several measures could be taken to prevent these problems. The first solution would be an educational and comprehension program should be conducted for offenders to guide them to do the right things. What is more, the government should coordinate with employers to create job opportunities for offenders to give them the second chance to reintegrate into the community. A second measure would be maintaining the segregation between dangerous criminals and the others to avoid the tempting and intimidation from them.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for the recommitment of formers crimes after they returned from jails, and steps need to be taken to tackle these problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
It is true that a large number of criminals go back to illegal activities...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, second, so, in conclusion, it is true, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34977578475 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92786996469 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596412556054 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0468427317 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4166666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0692445076185 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0259115701869 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0196301038738 0.0667982634062 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0510542633375 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00395522935871 0.056905535591 7% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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