Research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes again when set free. What are the reasons? What can be done to solve the problems
In this day and age, it is found that having been released from prisons, most of the wrongdoers tends to commit crimes again. There is proposed to be a variety of factors contributing to repetition of crimes by criminals, namely job application and chance of rehabilitation. This essay will discuss in details about two principal reasons as well as some solutions to address the issue.
To begin with, difficulties in finding employment are thought to be inducements attribute the ex-offenders to infringe the law again . To be specific, having seen a person’s track records, employers have a propensity to reject his occupation petition due to their perception that an ex-criminal is uncooperative. As a consequent, the insufficiency of money to survive undoubtedly leaves ex-convicts no alternative but to commit crimes. Besides, the social acceptance of released prisoners is also to blame for this phenomenon. In fact, it is undeniable that in various cultural settings, being reintegrated back into a community after the jail term seems to be a remote possibility. It is of no doubt that under heavily discriminations from the neighbors, the formers inmates might have mental problems letting them to reiterate a felony.
However, there are some measures could be taken by governments to mitigate this problem. Firstly, during the detention period, it is advisable that convicts should be equipped with some useful skill with the intention that after being released, they would keep abreast with the rapid social development. Moreover, the authorities should subsidize those criminals financially until they find a new career, which will support their family and allow those people to concentrate on seeking for their job. Secondly, it is essential that the former detainees be provided with scientific counseling and proper medical care which might ameliorate their psychic conditions and improve their social interaction with others.
In conclusion, taking the aforementioned opinions into consideration, the governments play a pivotal role in alleviating the rate of re-offending in the society. Therefore, they should the utmost to develop the harmonious society with those previous offenders.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1870.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51622418879 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14119299401 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628318584071 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2541923283 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.666666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4666666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117579371996 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386769256304 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0243044872446 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0645003531413 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413150746166 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.46 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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